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This scar upon my eye,
Which doth make sight seem a lie,
Holds me back from my truth,
Having been placed upon me in my youth.

The butcher knife which came hunting for my head,
Left my mother's murderer cold and dead.
A life full of vengeance ahead,
Filling the souls of evil with dread.

A new rage of pain inside,
I hunt for a new pride.
No longer villains hide,
As I raise the evil tide.

The slashing of the butcher knife,
Killing an old friend's wife.
The thirst for blood,
Apparent on my faced cloaked by a red hood.

The heroes of the world come and go,
But I watch their final death throe.
A hero no more,
All I hunt for is pure blood and gore.
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This is one I thought of a hero who was damaged and then went after people in a rage. This is strictly for the halloween contest, and I may do more
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D: shakespearean language!!! RUN!

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There's not enough pot to go to
92% of the teenage population,
You're all Bloody Retarded.
I love Shakespearean language....I think I'm gonna use it more :p

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thai language doesnt tantalise mine ears

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There's not enough pot to go to
92% of the teenage population,
You're all Bloody Retarded.
heh, I love it, really. I just don't get why it's so confusing.

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its easy once youve read a bit. i dont really like shakespear because hes to vague.

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There's not enough pot to go to
92% of the teenage population,
You're all Bloody Retarded.
Oh, I know, it's just nobody takes the time to read it...And he's not so much vague, as insenuative. He's not blatant, which I like.

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Hmm.... If you are reading this then it must mean that I like and have posted on your art, or journal! :hug:
Whoa....really good poetry there! =D

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Fast food is more fun when it's burning out someone's eye socket.
Oh my. This is absolutely awsome! Really is something to be proud of

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"I am a little bit insecure, a little unconfident. 'Cause you don't understand, I do what I can. But sometimes, I don't make sense"
id prefer to understand the plot, then go "huh? when did this happen" and stop reading

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There's not enough pot to go to
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You're all Bloody Retarded.

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